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Laughing-Red
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"This is a great line- "when he extended his long white hand to her and cast her a smile of melted moonbeams"! You have some very lovely description, and some well-crafted metaphors here. Just a small point about the character - she's living a terrible tragedy, and yet her diary escape is described: "a place for me where I can forget about the world and forget about the pretentiousness and superficial complexities of life." That seems a little inconsistent - wouldn't she be more anxious to escape from the more serious, immediate problems in her life - like the pain and violence? Other than that slight inconsistency, you've created an evocative vignette. Good job! "
hello there Red.thank you for your comment on my peice,i must say it gives me great pleasure to receive feedback on my work .
about the diary girl,her greatest and immediate problems in her life is all the mind games people play , their superficiality , the wall of pretense that surrounds them all , and the indifference of others to her (her father , her schoolmates etc.) . She's inside a world where all that should matter is who people are (you know , loving and understanding and sincere,because no one around her is), and not what people do(bombs and nuclear weapons and all)..yes you can say she's a little ignorant to world affairs , but she really just wants to pretend it doesn't exist.
Much thanks on your comment .
Btw , i have a butterfly fetish too..i think i have about 6 peices of butterfly jewellery and a pair of butterfly sandals that i wear whenever and wherever i can . Who can blame us ? They're so beautiful and in a class of their own..and their colours and movement are so evocative.
I like photography too. It's like capturing poetry in motion . Though i can say without arrogance i suck at it .
Thank you! I was totally surprised when I got an email from them in my inbox - I'd submitted that stuff so freaking long ago! They moderate EVERY post, so it takes forever sometimes to get anything up. The community for fantasy writers is better and it makes up for the awkward navigation/commenting system. I sure do miss the auto-notify when I'm on Elfwood!
Hi there, thought ya might like the Cormorant snap, i wasnt in a boat but i was nearly in the water lol,
did ya get the long tailed tit snap in ya mail? catcha later David.
I just sent you an email - yes, I did get the ltt pic (still not courageous enough to type it! )! Thanks again.
About the cormorant pic - my da does fly-fishing, and he has this big suit - you know, the big rubber overalls, connected to the boots? - which he thinks I should borrow so I can get 'some really good pictures of ducks'. Maybe you should get one of those before you get wet.
hello there Red.thank you for your comment on my peice,i must say it gives me great pleasure to receive feedback on my work .
about the diary girl,her greatest and immediate problems in her life is all the mind games people play , their superficiality , the wall of pretense that surrounds them all , and the indifference of others to her (her father , her schoolmates etc.) . She's inside a world where all that should matter is who people are (you know , loving and understanding and sincere,because no one around her is), and not what people do(bombs and nuclear weapons and all)..yes you can say she's a little ignorant to world affairs , but she really just wants to pretend it doesn't exist.
Much thanks on your comment .
Btw , i have a butterfly fetish too..i think i have about 6 peices of butterfly jewellery and a pair of butterfly sandals that i wear whenever and wherever i can . Who can blame us ? They're so beautiful and in a class of their own..and their colours and movement are so evocative.
I like photography too. It's like capturing poetry in motion . Though i can say without arrogance i suck at it .
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There should probably be some witty words of wisdom here, but there aren't.
nice galleria!
Odd, I almost never go there. I considered joining a while back, but their imposing page of limitations and quiz on it scared me off.
did ya get the long tailed tit snap in ya mail? catcha later David.
About the cormorant pic - my da does fly-fishing, and he has this big suit - you know, the big rubber overalls, connected to the boots? - which he thinks I should borrow so I can get 'some really good pictures of ducks'. Maybe you should get one of those before you get wet.
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